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Young Writers Society


Will Review Poetry and short stories!



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Sun Apr 20, 2014 5:18 pm
Milanimo says...



Post a link to any poems or short stories you would like me to read. Make sure to post the title, and/or any descriptions or things you would like me to know. Message me for any questions!

I would say my best thing to critique is grammar and figurative language, and fantasy is not always my strongest genre.

Heres two of my reviews to see if you would like my feedback:

Dreamcatcher

What have I done?
  





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Sun Apr 20, 2014 7:27 pm
retrodisco666 says...



Shotgun kisses.

Hey If you could review this poem for me it would be greatly appreciated. Just any feedback in general would be great.
'I have loved to the point of madness, which for me is the only true way to love'
~Francoise Sagan
  








For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle