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Sat May 22, 2010 6:42 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey Tiffany. Would you love doing next part of my story? Seventh chapter is up and I need reviews on that. The link is in my signature.

Thanks in advance!

~Shubhi
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Tue May 25, 2010 7:55 pm
LauraElizabeth says...



Could you review the first chapter of my fantasy novel? The link is in my signature. Thank you!
  





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Sat May 29, 2010 4:01 pm
Rascalover says...



bump***
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sun May 30, 2010 12:09 am
Sins says...



Will you review my homework for me please? :smt003 It's a monologue, by the way. I've got lots of reviews, but I've edited it a bit and would like some more opinions on the edited version.

topic64107.html

Sorry it's kind of bad... I don't like homework

Thanks in advance,

xoxo Rhian
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Sun May 30, 2010 4:38 am
Rascalover says...



Finished all of them thanks for rwequesting a review.


Who else would like one? :mrgreen:
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Tue Jun 01, 2010 6:41 pm
Rascalover says...



bump
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sat Jun 05, 2010 2:50 am
Rascalover says...



bummmmmp :pirate3:
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sun Jun 13, 2010 5:59 pm
Rascalover says...



Hey yall im back had a change of cable :)

Who needs a review? Do I have to beg? :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sun Jun 13, 2010 6:02 pm
austenite says...



No begging here!! post719654.html#p719654 Thanks in advance!
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Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:07 am
Rascalover says...



All done

Who else??
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Thu Jun 17, 2010 6:05 pm
Rascalover says...



Bump****
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Sat Jun 19, 2010 11:40 pm
blackbird12 says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic65349.html

Could you review this for me? Thanks.
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Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:36 am
Puffycherry says...



Hello,

I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter.

Information:

Genre: Fantasy
Title: Ecole des Monstres
Link: post724784.html#p724784

Thanks, in advance.
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Wed Jun 30, 2010 8:37 pm
Rascalover says...



All done anyone else need a review????
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Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:02 am
HorseradishCares says...



I would like a review, pleeeeaaaassseeee.
It's a poem: viewtopic.php?t=65379
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