Yeah, it was cool, but it'll be cooler once I edit it
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she got a dazed impression of a whirling chaos in which steel flashed and hacked, arms tossed, snarling faces appeared and vanished, and straining bodies collided, rebounded, locked and mingled in a devil's dance of madness. Robert Howard
Belzebub reached the bridge. He raised his flaming whip and fire came from his nostrils. A sight enough to strike any mortal soul dumb with fear and despair. A low growl escaped the archdemon's jagged teeth. His slimy scales glinted, and his toes curled in the shadowy corners of the cavern.
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she got a dazed impression of a whirling chaos in which steel flashed and hacked, arms tossed, snarling faces appeared and vanished, and straining bodies collided, rebounded, locked and mingled in a devil's dance of madness. Robert Howard
right...unfortunately on St. patty's day I got a bit more drunk than i expected and I only could manage to read the first two 'chapters' or vignettes or whatever you would call them. I'll get what I can done today, and I'll give a review of what I've read later today sometime.
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Ha! Ha! He! He! Well, as long as you've enjoyed yourself But! You might've missed some linguistic running gags in that case, and only paid attention to the plot. Not that I'm bitching, just bitching.
she got a dazed impression of a whirling chaos in which steel flashed and hacked, arms tossed, snarling faces appeared and vanished, and straining bodies collided, rebounded, locked and mingled in a devil's dance of madness. Robert Howard
Well I haven't gotten all of it read, but I'll say this much. The idea you have running here combining several epics at once is utterly brilliant, and it comes off as hilarious at times. The ideas running parallel to one another works very well, and I'm impressed so far. I have nothing negative to note at this time.
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she got a dazed impression of a whirling chaos in which steel flashed and hacked, arms tossed, snarling faces appeared and vanished, and straining bodies collided, rebounded, locked and mingled in a devil's dance of madness. Robert Howard
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