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Oh, don't be so melodramatic... It doesn't suit you.

I enjoyed reading this. Interesting premise, a couple of unique characters, and has a lot of potential for some very cool action scenes in the future pages. The review/critique is attached. Feel free to PM with with questions or when you put more of it up. Nice job!

-Pattycakes

Pattycakes wrote:Oh, don't be so melodramatic... It doesn't suit you. :P
-Pattycakes

Ha. It's not so much melodramatic as it is just pure and unchecked frustration. I might be a little impatient, but the truth is that I've had many works in the Advanced Critiques section and even the ones that I consider dear to my heart go largely ignored. So maybe I shouldn't get so pissed off, but it happens on occasion.

Thanks for reading mate. I'll see to it that you get some points for it.

Chapters 2 & 3 are now up. It's about 20 pages in all, now set in Times New Roman font, for anyone who was getting annoyed with Courier.

now set in Times New Roman font, for anyone who was getting annoyed with Courier.

Haha, much thanks.

Good work on this part! The drill is relatively the same as last time. Enjoy.

-Pattycakes

Chapter 3 is ready to be read now. Here it is.