I have it broken into more chapters now so not so labour-intensive.
BRITISH Spelling:
Color = colour
realize = realise
meter = metre
center = centre
ETCETERA. Please do not change it because it is terribly annoying when i'm trying to fix it up and there's millions of them everywhere.
This installment is mainly just an introducing of characters/etc. THERE IS A PLOT! It's going to come out in the next chapter... i know this is weird but i could not really incorporate it in without destroying what i had written in here.
*Ignore spelling completely it is completely pointless!!*
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