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Mon Feb 11, 2008 4:08 pm
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Aedomir says...



Is this the one which you said was about 50k of words? I'll read this in a it when I get time, and edit this post with a review but I'm sure you've ot loads already.
We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.
  





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Tue Feb 12, 2008 10:28 pm
smorgishborg says...



I hope you write a love scene for Terri and Mark at the end!

EDIT: It was fine...
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The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
- Robert Frost

It cost $7 million to build the Titanic, and $200 million to make a film about it.
The plastic ties on the end of shoelaces are called aglets
  





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Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:39 am
Kylan says...



Thanks smorg! I hope these next chapters aren't so predictable. Actually, not too much happens...

However, the section after this has one of my favorite scenes in it, so keep an eye out.

In reference to the love scene: I don't know. Maybe. Frankly, I just don't have the experience to write anything sincere. I'm guessing I did okay though, for what I did write?

-Kylan
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Tue Mar 11, 2008 3:02 pm
smorgishborg says...



I"ve been busy.
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The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
- Robert Frost

It cost $7 million to build the Titanic, and $200 million to make a film about it.
The plastic ties on the end of shoelaces are called aglets
  





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Wed Mar 12, 2008 12:29 am
Kylan says...



This first scene is probably one of my favorite scenes.
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"I am beginning to despair
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- Serenade, Adélia Prado
  





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Mon Mar 24, 2008 6:36 pm
Kylan says...



For anyone who cares, I just finished this baby!

Three cheers for me!

-Kylan
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- Serenade, Adélia Prado
  





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Sat Apr 05, 2008 2:08 pm
smorgishborg says...



Huzzah! Huzzah! Huzzah!
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The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
- Robert Frost

It cost $7 million to build the Titanic, and $200 million to make a film about it.
The plastic ties on the end of shoelaces are called aglets
  





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Sat Apr 05, 2008 2:28 pm
Kylan says...



I’m worried about what will happen to Eva, on one hand you could have her survive, but I’m not sure that would be really plausible enough. Careful how you handle that.


Just wait and see, my friend. Just wait and see. :wink:
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"I am beginning to despair
and can see only two choices:
either go crazy or turn holy."

- Serenade, Adélia Prado
  








As a former (and rather excellent) liar herself, Aru knew that, sometimes, speaking the truth felt like wrenching a thorn out of your side. But doing the opposite meant pretending it wasn't there. And that made every single step ache. It was no way to live.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality