So, I am working on the skeleton of new story idea, and it involves controlling people in their subconscious mind through their nerves. Basically they rig the person so that with a controller they can move the person however they wish. My main character will be 14-17ish and won't know tons of how it works. I don't plan on him finding out most of the technical stuff either, or writing from those who do's perspective.
Do you think it would lessen the book's quality if I didn't explain most of how all the nerve-controlled stuff works?
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