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A New Light on a Distant Shot
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Points: 2374
Reviews: 118
Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:52 pm
myfreindsavamp
says...
Disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by
myfreindsavamp
on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.
“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
Gender:
Points: 2374
Reviews: 118
Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:56 pm
myfreindsavamp
says...
Disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by
myfreindsavamp
on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:45 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.
“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
Gender:
Points: 1395
Reviews: 565
Sat Jul 26, 2008 1:34 am
Stori
says...
It's real good. No mistakes that I can see, and you conveyed the characters' feelings well.
"The one thing you can't trade for your heart's desire is your heart."
Miles Vorkosigan
"You can be an author if you learn to paint pictures with words."
Brian Jacques
Gender:
Points: 2374
Reviews: 118
Sat Aug 16, 2008 2:18 pm
myfreindsavamp
says...
Disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by
myfreindsavamp
on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:46 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.
“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
Gender:
Points: 2374
Reviews: 118
Tue Sep 09, 2008 11:38 am
myfreindsavamp
says...
disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by
myfreindsavamp
on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:46 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.
“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
Gender:
Points: 2374
Reviews: 118
Mon Sep 29, 2008 11:47 am
myfreindsavamp
says...
Disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by
myfreindsavamp
on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.
“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
Gender:
Points: 2374
Reviews: 118
Sat Oct 25, 2008 7:36 pm
myfreindsavamp
says...
Disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by
myfreindsavamp
on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.
“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
Gender:
Points: 300
Reviews: 0
Mon Oct 27, 2008 12:36 pm
sibyis
says...
From what I can read here, your story seems to have a great idea. It's unique, and the characters seem dynamic and able to convey feelings well in a refreshing manner. Your characters are not at all lifeless dolls. It's nice.
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Points: 300
Reviews: 0
Wed Oct 29, 2008 12:03 am
righting
says...
It was a good read... cool.
Always looking for a good book to read.
Gender:
Points: 2374
Reviews: 118
Wed Oct 29, 2008 10:56 am
myfreindsavamp
says...
Disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by
myfreindsavamp
on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:48 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.
“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
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Gender:
Points: 2374
Reviews: 118