Right.
So my current piece is Lyla. And although it's going OK and is nearing the end (ish), I need some help.
Check here also for any future updates.
18/8/07
I need feedback on if the action in Part 10 was too rushed- like it was in Part 8. I seem to hurry arguments and I know that they are supposed to be fast paced but mine are just....too quick.
Also, Part 11 should be posted by mid September.
Finally thank you to:
JC, Meevs, Steve, Twit, KR and anyone else who has critiqued Lyla. All your help has definitely improved my work!
Any suggestions for the story? Feedback on my worry would be great!
Thanks,
Alainna
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