I have a new story idea for this site. I've written a rough draft on paper but I would like to hear your thoughts on what I have before I publish it on here. This is the information:
TITLE: Re-Nightmare
GENRE: Mystery/Thriller, Dramatic
RATING: 18+ (certain scenes, not for whole book)
CHARACTERS:
Alfred - Alfred is a 31-year-old male with a wife and two twin daughters. He is all around nervous and paranoid, always looking behind his shoulder. He never lets his girls go outside in the backyard alone - he always has to watch them. He's the breadwinner of the family, bringing home about 1000 a week for his construction job, while his wife is stay at home and is working on a novel.
Grace - Grace is a 27 year old man. He is Alfred's best friend and often comes over for beer and poker. He's loud, obnoxious, and goes from girl to girl. He's single and has no kids, but he makes it up with friends and parties, despite almost being thirty.
Mystery - Real name Riley, Mystery is a 41-year-old male. He's perverted, has a dark sense of humor, and has Bipolar Disorder. He collects knives and guns and had hunted deer when he was younger. He doesn't have a solid job or a house, he sleeps where he cz=an and eats what and when he can.
Other characters to be introduced
I haven't worked on the plot yet. I only have the beginning worked out. The middle and end of the story are still to be created. But I won't tell you guys what I have in the plot because it's an extremely rough draft and could change at any time, and I'm focusing on characters right now.
Thoughts?
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