Hey, guys.
Well, I am tempted not to share any more of work on here. It's not the community of people. It's the criticism that I have been receiving. Yes, I have been enjoying everyone's feedback and I'm glad that people think that I've written something pretty original. However, people comment on aspects of my story that I know that I need to work on. I realize this. Right now, I am just worried about getting down my 'skeltons' of ideas, and not too much about grammar, word choise, ect. I'm only showing my story to see what people think of my ideas.
It fusterates me that people act like, "I have no idea what i'm doing. My opeaning sentence is action-packed, and leaves a bit of mytery. After all, professinal writes do this. In my opeaning scene, Phe, my humanoid-bird girl, is getting enlarged by the PREFORM device. Yes, my discripton is very vauge (with a hint of what the surrounding look like) because my scene is so full of action. This scene takes place at World Health Orginization. Phe will be going there later. So, i'm not too worried about describing EVERYTHING in my opening scene. After all, published/e-book authors do this. In fact, there are some authors who are vauge, and they still get information across. People have commited on my style. Yes, it's a bit technical, but i'm going for a 'hard-science/medical' type feel.
It's just....yes, I like/am apprective of feedback, but PLEASE STOP acting like I have no idea as to what i'm doing. After all, everyones criticism is just 'confusing me'. Right now, all I care about is my uideas. People don't act like this is a work in progress. Also, some of peoples commets are because they didn't read everything. Literaly. I state things in the text.
Oh, and I realize that i'm not perfect,but stilk. I have improved. A lot.
Anyone else fusterated about their works. I'm fusterated.
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