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sabradan wrote:I posted two poems in "other poetry" this past week that needs critiques!
*seductive lounge lizard voice* I'll do yours if you do mine...* (wink, wink)
The first one is called
"Falling in Love with Parades, Military Music, and the girl in number 23 King George Street"
and the other is
"Untitled"
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