What I will critique:
-Anything from the fiction forums. i.e Sci-fi, Fantasy, Other fiction etc.
-If you want me to critique fanfiction, however, check if I know what it is based on first, or I'll be lost!
-I'm willing to give my opinion on art, but I'm no guru.
What I won't critique:
- Poetry. I don't know enough about how poetry works to be much use, I'm afraid ^^
-Lyrics. Can't write a song to save myself.
-Scripts
Cost:
I expect nothing in return, and I will do my best to be as much use as possible
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First come, first served. I'll post the title of critiqued stories here: (Now hidden, the list was getting long. Click below to check it out)
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-Scavenger 1.1- TL-G Wooster (Oct 30th)
-Scavenger 1.2- TL-G Wooster (Nov 2nd)
-Scavenger 1.3- TL-G Wooster (Nov 2nd)
-Heart's illusion prologue- Maki-Chan (Nov 9th)
***sorry for the delay, have been doing exams***
-Heart's illusion- Maki-Chan (Dec 1st)
-Project Fugato-Reason Invalid (Dec 1st)
-Project Fugato (2)- Reason Invalid (Dec 1st)
-Walking in the dark- LovableLittleSock (Dec 1st)
-Chapter ten, Childhood-wisemann210 (Dec 3rd)
-The Method of Madness-melkor (Dec 3rd)
-Well this shouldn't be! prologue- Lord Anzius (Dec 3rd)
-The mansion chapter 1- Lord Anzius (Dec 4th)
-The mansion chapter 2-Lord Anzius (Dec 6th)
-The ripper prologue-Lord Anzius (Dec 6th)
-Adelade, a prologue- Lost_in_dreamland (Dec 6th)
-Already Won Me- Lilymoore (Dec 8th)
-Dr/Mr Vandergaurd-Kissthewitch (Dec 9th)
-My Dearest Madelyn-anti-pop (Dec 14th)
-Cat steps-Rosey Unicorn (Dec 15th)
-The love Note (heavily edited)- Jamie_rocks (Dec 15th)
-Come back with me-KailiaMarie (Dec 18th)
-Chapter one of my werewolf story- Haruno Sakura (Dec 16th)
-Killer's point of View- LilyJamey (Dec 18th)
-Poison Love-Night Mistress (Dec 18-19th...done over midnight LOL)
-Accidents happen- Kaylyn (Dec 20th)
-Poison Love chapter one-Night Mistress (Dec 21st)
-Well, this shouldn't be chapter one- Lord Anzius (Dec 21st)
-Well, this shouldn't be chapter two- Lord Anzius (Dec 21st)
**sorry. Camping and holiday stuff. ><; ***
-Mansion, chapter three- Lord Anzius (21st January)
-Mansion, chapter four- Lord Anzius (21st Jan)
-Bloodlust- Lucyy (21st Jan)
-Tomorrow Does Not Exist, Part one - JosephDean (23rd Jan)
-Tomorrow Does Not Exist, Part two - JosephDean (23rd Jan)
-Tomorrow Does Not Exist, Part three- JosephDean (25-26th Jan)
-Tomorrow Does Not Exist, Part Four- JosephDean (26th Jan)
-Night Visitor- Pippiedooda (26th Jan)
-Christmas Magic-Rosey Unicorn (27th Jan)
-Unzipped I- Hannah (27th Jan)
-Unzipped II-Hannah (27th Jan)
-Unzipped III-Hannah (28th Jan)
-Trapped- asxz (29th Jan)
-Split personalities (30 Jan)
-Split personalities part 2 (feb 1)
-Split personalities part 3 (feb 2)
-Prince of Janovia chapter one part 1 (feb 4)
-Prince of Janovia chapter one part 2 -BeckiW(feb 5)
-Gaea 1-8- Excalibur (21-23 Feb)
-Shepard's Lamb-Maki-Chan (25 Feb)
-The Fairies Gift- Rosey Unicorn (25 Feb)
-For the Girls chapter two- Moriah Leila (25 Feb)
-You kept me alive- My Sunshine (1st March)
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So you know where your story is in the line.
So, any requests?
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