Just an excerpt from my new story thing. Kind of a trial, if you like it, I'll post some more. If you don't, well then, I'll see what I can do to fix it Here's the first couple, I've written about 20 so far.
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"We met through Kristy."
That actually isn't much of a lie. We did meet through our mutual friend, Kristy, just not the way my parents would have approved of. Kristy was invited to a college party and at last minute, decided to invite me to go with her. We weren't that close but I was bored and tagged along. The minute we got there, she ran off to make out with her ex and I ended up standing awkwardly by the door, praying for the night to end. He came up and asked me what a gorgeous girl like me was doing hiding. His eyes were hazy and his words slurred but I still flushed and was giddy that a college guy would take notice of me. We talked and flirted some more and by the end of the night, were planning our first date. Kristy was ecstatic and two weeks later, we were going steady.
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"We never smoked. That's just Dad's cigar's, not me."
At first, it was just one or two- a quick smoke before he dropped me off home. Soon, he began to buy packs of Camels for not only him, but me too. I didn’t like it much but I soon got addicted and didn’t really have a choice. Sometimes when he had a couple of cigarettes and a little pot, he was nicer. Not much nicer but still better than the permanently pissed off PMSing mood he seemed to be in all the time. The sweet yet sophisticated man I had fallen in love had disappeared and a fire-breathing dragon was left in his place.
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"Oh, I slipped on some ice"
With time, the lies slid out slicker than an oil spill. My mother had always been wary of him but she had always hated any boy who wanted to date her precious 17 year old baby. I was a rebel at heart, always bringing home boys she was sure to loathe. He was a fresh burst of air and threw off the sheet of protection that suffocated me all my life. Even when he hit me, I felt a sick rush of adrenaline, very much like when you’re going downhill on a roller coaster.
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"Of course not! He would never hit me!"
I remember the first time he did it. He had bought me some chocolates that I didn't like and I jokingly tried to throw it out the tinted window of the car. He stopped the car and his hand was fast and sharp against my face. It was silent for more than 10 minutes other than the soft voice of the girl singing about her love on the radio. I turned away from him and held my hand to the hot, throbbing welt on my face. It wasn't even that it hurt, it was just cruel shock that he would ever raise a hand to me. He and I didn't talk for almost two weeks after but he called and called and finally, I answered.
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If you haven't already realized, it's sort of a memoir or diary of this girl who has/had an abusive boyfriend. It's not in the right order but it's meant to tell a story, starting from beginning to end. Eventually, it'll get to the present and you'll see what happened. Maybe, I'll have some dialogue :p
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