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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Daughter of War - Chapter 28: Connecting the DotsHello again! ~ Writing Commentary Jase knew that she was more than just a wise deity. Jase knew that there was some sort of resilience and savagery that stayed cloaked ...
goodolnoah - 4 minutes ago
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Reviews » Poetry » Chickens, Horror
The MonsterHey, KaeRae here! Just wanted to review your story while I was reading it. First of all, I don't have a fear of chickens, but the way you described them ...
KaeRae88 - 1 hour ago
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Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
else (or something i hadn't said before)else i am to cry i think you should tear my tears away
herbalhour - 1 hour ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
The Daughter of War - Chapter 27: BloodlineHello again! ~ Writing Commentary The healers, thank gods, were able to successfully remove all roots and growths from her brain, only leaving a few in Persephone’s lungs. Good to ...
goodolnoah - 5 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Daughter of War - Chapter 26: ReflectionsHello again! ~ Writing Commentary Jase glanced around them and rolled his eyes as a group of men cheered at a table closer to the bar. A small, petite, brunette ...
goodolnoah - 5 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Daughter of War - Chapter 25: The Temple of ApolloHello again! ~ Writing Commentary He was created by magic, therefore smashing all the odds that he really was a dickface like all the other kin of the sea. As ...
goodolnoah - 6 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
The Daughter of War - Chapter 24: Coral, Crimson, and CreamHello again! ~ Writing Commentary a long strand of blackness extending from his fingertips to the book Josephine was looking at. The LORE, so yummy. I liked the section where ...
goodolnoah - 6 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Daughter of War - Chapter 23: Vengeance and LustHello again! ~ Writing Commentary The whole scene with Persephone, and this chapter was a rollercoaster of emotions. Especially the scene with Persephone and Josephine having a heartfelt conversation.
goodolnoah - 6 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Daughter of War - Chapter 22: They All Fall DownHello again! ~ Writing Commentary Persephone hesitated but closed her eyes, her chestnut silken locks falling from the intricate bun that Josephine had spent hours working on for her. Among ...
goodolnoah - 7 hours ago
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Forums » Lounge, The
Planning or Pantsing?Thank you for all the great responses! I find, nowadays, that fully planning out a story burns me out by the end. I had fully planned out a story which ...
goodolnoah - 7 hours ago
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Poetry » Chickens, Horror
The MonsterThis poem talks about a fear I have had since I was around the age of 2. A bad experience with this creature has made me fearful of its presence.
VeryBerry - 8 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Adventures of Rose Hood Chapter 38: Thus Begins the BattleHello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Wrath + Pride’s army arrives. In addition to ...
vampricone6783 - 10 hours ago
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Forums » Writers Corner
Kate's Kozy Kove#15 Growing Up Poetic Style - 5 - Visual/Found Inspiration - 4 - Lyric Coin Flip - N/A - Incorporate into poem Lyric: "Like a Coming of Age" Survive school ...
KateHardy - 16 hours ago
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Forums » Writers Corner
Wisteria’s Wistful WoodlandGrowing Pains Today's Inspiration: Today's song was Coming of Age by Foster the People (Again! What are the chances?). I rolled a rhyming poem and had to incorporate the song's ...
WeepingWisteria - 16 hours ago
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Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, General
Behind Closed DoorsGood Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this was quite the tale here. Starting ...
KateHardy - 17 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, General
The MoonHello Hello I know this is an older poem and that you won't see this however I will still give my thoughts. I might not have much feedback as I ...
Moonlily - 18 hours ago