Young Writers Society

Hi, Tesla! Ljungtroll here with a review. This is a very sweet poem, and the feelings you/the speaker have for this boy come through clearly. I like the bluntness of ...

Josefina’s Grandpa (shadow with eyes and hands) (from my story “Josefina’s only wish”):

Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! HELLO THERE! I stumbled upon this piece of work and decided to drop a review. This was posted quite some ...

Nice poem written by the author. "All those days I felt worthless, Came back to the surface." The feeling of being unhappy about whatever is happening with you is an ...

Hello! I absolutely love this story. I’m not even a big fan of video games, but I totally relate to this social anxiety. From the first few sentences, I kind ...

Hey!! Ava here... I'll just start with the review. I could immediately tell that how genuine these feelings were as I read the poem. I loved the choice of words ...

Hello, Kate! Wist is finally here to review part two. This is a nice sequel to part one, but I will say this part felt much more exposition-heavy than the ...

Jay stood stiffly at the edge of the dancefloor, looking around the most bizarre arrangement of people with too-powerful magic and too-raging of hormones. The lights were bright, the dancefloor ...

Hello! The idea behind this poem is really nice. I like the repetition of the lines, “I will listen to the sound of your breathing, And you can listen to ...

I tried to capture social anxiety. I don't even play video games, can you tell?

Review Spotlight for May 2024 Top 5 Reviews: Re: 3AM by @Coffeewriter Re: i hope i pass my ap exams by @Bluepanther512 Re: Box Children - Chapter 3 by @Roxanne ...

Aww! This is such a sweet poem!!! I love the expert weaving of the letters into the body of the poem! Not something all acrostics can do well, but this ...

Ahh I can't believe I'm nearly three whole months late but still first here. We must fix this! I’m on my phone, so quoting ability is limited and typos are ...

I'm fine with all of them but the way you set it up was shocking lol. I'm excited to see where this goes

Literary Spotlight for May 2024 Top 10 Overall: to be known is to be loved by @LadyBug i hope i pass my ap exams by @yoshi mama says the worst ...

Hi!! Dropping for a quick review here! I read your previous chapter too, so that I would have the correct context for this installment. I want to say that I ...