Young Writers Society

I actually started this story "Exes and Killers" because I got writer's block on another WIP, I randomly got on my notes and started writing dialogues, then it turned into ...

Hi it's 22Midnight again hope your doing well, let's get into it! Side Note again sorry this took so long I haven't been up to reviewing lately so I left ...

a blue-purple flower, a sigh stirring dry grass, the face of a windowpane suspicion

Scalders Prolouge “Is it safe?” “Not sure.” Two male cartographers step off a giant dark oak ship, onto a small, tropical island. They all head off and look for a ...

Hello Hello, I am here for a short but hopefully worthwhile review. Forgive me if this is a light on feedback as I don't have much to say after this ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this was quite the powerful tale. I ...

Must say, this looks quite good and I must give my compliments. But I found two spelling errors in the text I feel you might want to know about. One ...

I love the evolution of Janet! ^^ A little tip, maybe make one post and then add all the pictures of her in there with their subtitle, or else it ...

also technically a paragraph, if I had to pick just one line I suppose it would be the last sentence. Space, is a deep, deep place. Full of many things: ...

Murders in the Brook.

if it gives anyone comfort like 30 of these characters will be in the background and not have major POV roles or anything

This work is amazing! it is powerful, and visual, and flat out incredible! I am deeply moved by the conversation the narrator is having. It piques my interst when you ...

Time for a Black Cat Review!! MEOW! Hello, friend! My name is Ellie and today I will be reviewing using my very own Black Cat Review Method! It is very ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Wow is my first opinion of this. I loved reading your poem, and hearing how it flows. Your rhyming skills are incredible!! I often find myself struggling to rhyme, so ...