Young Writers Society

You leave us on a very ominous note. It is very clear that something DOES happen to these sweet innocent girls. My guess is molestation, kidnapping, or both. These are very real things that happen in real life, and they do tend to happen in public places where people think nothing bad can happen. At a circus perhaps? This is quite sad as everyone else already seems to think that the girls are brats. This does tend to happen with children whose parents have a lot of money. The second they do something wrong they are labeled as spoiled brats. The girls parents are most likely the only thing keeping them happy, and whatever happens at the circus will most likely destroy that.

I came here without reading or knowing anything about the"Town of Richardson" story but I seemed to have understood your lyrical art. I thought this at first should've been poetry, but if you aiad it's lyrical, then it's probably lyrical.

Alright, personal analysis. Just a reminder that everyone sees perspectives and thinks differently like a half full and half empty cup of water. Forgive me my interpretation wasn't what you wanted at first.

I liked your little "rhyme" and "groove" of the first two lines because not only were they short but had similar meaning. Sometimes, you can like such simple, small, mundane things in life, don't we?

However moving on, we get some interesting lines from below:

Known to family as Leona and Amelia Richardson.

But they were known to their peers as

“Brats,annoying and spoiled.”

Only thing that mattered to others was the money they had

All they wanted was to live and enjoy life.

They were only two little girls,after all.