hello hello! i haven't reviewed in a while so uhh yeah
let's just get into this!
I never understood why you changed so much.
I never understood why we grew apart.
good introduction! i don't think it feels very spousal though? growing apart is an action typically used to describe children, not adults who should have their lives together. i like it though; creates a tense atmosphere for the rest of the lyrics. relationships are complicated, and from what you've said, this one seems to suit that.
We miss you being present
Please, come back to us, Lucas
i'm a little confused; did they grow apart, or is lucas too focused on work? if he is a workaholic who doesn't spend time with his family, that's different. people grow apart on their own, but he would have to try to interact less with them. that would change the entire meaning of this song (and isabella's point of view toward him) i think.
of course, there is also the possibility of both. that complicates it even more.
Sure, you bring joy to others and sure, you let our son join in on the fun
the son never really came in much, which is something i've noticed. i think that he could've been a bigger part of the song! since their family is in such a rough spot, what is the son going through? out of all of the people, he probably has it the worst.
Breathe, relax
I’m always on your side, Lucas
Just tell me what’s wrong and maybe we can work this out..
do things end up working out? i have obviously not read the story, but from these lyrics, i feel interested in their story. i hope it went alright!
i like this ending! isabella is really dedicated to her husband, which is admirable. like i said already, relationships are complicated. fictional ones are a totally different story; so much can be mistaken and misunderstood by readers.
good lyrics though! the storytelling is good!
best,
spatula
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