Heyo! I’m gonna review these beautiful lyrics.
Before I begin, I wanted to say these lyrics are beautiful. They hold some much meaning. Great work.
Now let’s get to the review;
First off, I like how you started the lyrics with the title of the song. Things did take a dark turn however after the lyrics “You’d never hurt me (you murdered me)” I may not know the backstory but I do wish you continued this line before moving on.
Second, I noticed hidden messages within the lyrics. While the main part of the song is positive and kind, the lyrics in parentheses are saying a whole other thing. Which is interesting. I’m curious about how you managed to come up with this.
Thirdly, just a little nitpicking now. After the lyric “I trust that you care about me” I didn’t really see how thus lyric fit “How could you?” As I said before I don’t know the backstory behind this so maybe it’s there for a reason.
Overall, great lyrics. I love the biting message behind it. Keep up the great work! I’ll go check out the backstory for some more context.
☁️SkyJayde☁️
I wanted to start off this review by acknowledging the personal touch that is has, while maybe being something private, it can resonate with a lot of other people. I would've liked ,however, a little more fluctuation between the verses, more rhymes. I think that this part "I can%u2019t believe you%u2019re so kind (I can%u2019t believe you left me behind)" is the best because it has a sort of finality to it. Keep up the great work!
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