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Felicity-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies.

by vampricone6783


*Nova is seventeen years old now and the deaths of Philippa and her family are way past us.This is current times.I have Gacha Club character designs on my wall.Enjoy!

There was once a woman named Felicity Lopez who was happily married to Ethan Lopez and had two lovely teenage twins as daughters.Their names were Angelita and Maybelline.

She should have been able to continue to live her insufferably normal life.

But that was not the case.

One night,when she had hired a babysitter to babysit her kids (even though they were old enough to be by themselves,Felicity still didn't trust them on their own),she and Ethan were going out on date,to a fancy restaurant.

It was rare for them to have time for each other.Now..they could spend some together.

........................................................................

As they were waiting in line to get in (the line stretched for miles),a young,blond haired,violet eyed girl,who looked to be about sixteen,ran frantically around the line,asking people if they could help her find her parents.

Everyone was turning her down,telling her to go away,but the Lopezs offered to help her.She was lost,after all.

The girl led them away from the crowd,thanking them over and over for helping her and she went on rambling...about who knew what?

Felicity asked her if she could describe her parents and where she had last saw them,but the girl didn't seem to hear her.

Somehow,after all of that walking,they ended up in a rundown carnival,the one no one attended to for years.

The girl was missing,too.

"You fell right into my trap." A raspy voice said behind them.

Felicity and Ethan turned around..

...standing before them was a ridiculously eight foot tall,purple haired,pink dress wearing......

"Clown?!" Ethan asked in disbelief.

The clown smiled.As quick as lightning,she grabbed the confused humans,took them to her tent and stabbed the living daylights out of them.

.....................................................................

Felicity woke up feeling...strange.She could feel Ethan's body against hers,but her eyes were too blurry to see anything.

She could,however,make out the blur of the clown girl standing in front of them.

"Huh.That's different.When I killed you,you didn't immediately become clowns.You were bloody,demonic humans...and now you're clowns.Hmph.How very interesting." The clown said.

"What...are you? What's happening?" Felicity asked groggily,the world becoming less blurry and more weird.She was beginning to gain focus and consciousness now.

"What's happening? What's happening is that I need to kill boring humans like you so that I can maintain a human form,while you live in my carnival as clowns.Yes,you're stuck like this forever.Yes,you can't leave the carnival.Ever.Yes,I want to live among the boring humans,because they can be fascinating at times." She said.

"Oh,and you can call me Violet! Violet the clown!" With that,Violet left them.

Felicity could now understand things clearly.Ethan stirred next to her and that's when she noticed that they were clowns.

She explained to him what had happened.

Sure,they may be stuck there forever,but at least they had each other.


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Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),

Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!

First Impression: Well this is quite the story here. Once again so different and this time the twist actually really caught me by surprise. The clown really does seem to have a rather foolproof plan there trapping only those who actually have a good heart which is almost extra cruel here.

Anyway let's get right to it,

There was once a woman named Felicity Lopez who was happily married to Ethan Lopez and had two lovely teenage twins as daughters.Their names were Angelita and Maybelline.

She should have been able to continue to live her insufferably normal life.

But that was not the case.

One night,when she had hired a babysitter to babysit her kids (even though they were old enough to be by themselves,Felicity still didn't trust them on their own),she and Ethan were going out on date,to a fancy restaurant.


Oooh well this seems like far too normal of a start for it to last for much time at all here. I have a feeling this babysitter is going to end up doing something horrendous while Felicity is off being distracted.

As they were waiting in line to get in (the line stretched for miles),a young,blond haired,violet eyed girl,who looked to be about sixteen,ran frantically around the line,asking people if they could help her find her parents.

Everyone was turning her down,telling her to go away,but the Lopezs offered to help her.She was lost,after all.

The girl led them away from the crowd,thanking them over and over for helping her and she went on rambling...about who knew what?


Ooooht is new, not too often we've got children running about doing this sort of thing in one of these stories and its certainly even rarer to have someone actually end up offering to help said child in a time of need.

Felicity asked her if she could describe her parents and where she had last saw them,but the girl didn't seem to hear her.

Somehow,after all of that walking,they ended up in a rundown carnival,the one no one attended to for years.

The girl was missing,too.

"You fell right into my trap." A raspy voice said behind them.


Oh dear... well that is quite the twist. Of course the first people to actually ending up helping an innocent person out are the ones that are actually in the process of being trapped by a malevolent entity.

Felicity and Ethan turned around..

...standing before them was a ridiculously eight foot tall,purple haired,pink dress wearing......

"Clown?!" Ethan asked in disbelief.

The clown smiled.As quick as lightning,she grabbed the confused humans,took them to her tent and stabbed the living daylights out of them.


Well that was rather efficient. I really love how no nonsense and sudden that very violent stabbing turned out to be there. It really makes for an extra touch of horror almost because it suddenly makes that horrifying act feel small in comparison to what else is to come.

Felicity woke up feeling...strange.She could feel Ethan's body against hers,but her eyes were too blurry to see anything.

She could,however,make out the blur of the clown girl standing in front of them.

"Huh.That's different.When I killed you,you didn't immediately become clowns.You were bloody,demonic humans...and now you're clowns.Hmph.How very interesting." The clown said.


Ohhh well that is an interesting twist. It seems there's a little bit more at work here than just the standard sort of murder. There's some sort of magic attempting to convert them to clowns somehow it seems, at least in some supernatural form.

"What...are you? What's happening?" Felicity asked groggily,the world becoming less blurry and more weird.She was beginning to gain focus and consciousness now.

"What's happening? What's happening is that I need to kill boring humans like you so that I can maintain a human form,while you live in my carnival as clowns.Yes,you're stuck like this forever.Yes,you can't leave the carnival.Ever.Yes,I want to live among the boring humans,because they can be fascinating at times." She said.

"Oh,and you can call me Violet! Violet the clown!" With that,Violet left them.

Felicity could now understand things clearly.Ethan stirred next to her and that's when she noticed that they were clowns.

She explained to him what had happened.

Sure,they may be stuck there forever,but at least they had each other.


Well that is an oddly wholesome way to go there. I mean yes its a horrible fate and Violet seems like someone who definitely has some pretty evil intentions but simply being clowns forever without even being separated seems like one of the more bittersweet endings I have seen on one of these given quite how bad some of the others have been.

Aaaaand that's it for this one.

Overall: Overall I think this is another lovely thing to our long, long list of characters here. Once again another unique and I will keep being really impressed by these every single time.

As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.

Stay Safe
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Hi there!

Another evening, another origin story... I'm ready! It took me a minute to work out who Felicity was and how she fitted into everything because we have so many characters in this world and I'd read so many in between reading about the twins.

It was interesting to see how Felicity and Ethan ended up as clowns and I like having their backstory. I'm surprised the line for the fancy restaurant stretches so far. Don't they have reservations? Especially seeing as they took the time to book a babysitter I wouldn't have thought they'd want to spend the evening in a queue.

It's also unclear why Violet turned them into clowns. I'm pretty sure I've read her story but I can't remember if there's a reason she chooses her targets. Just because they were willing to help her? A lot of your other characters have clear motivations so I was just curious about this one.

I also think you could make Ethan and Felicity's reaction to learning what they are a bit bigger. They seem to accept it pretty quickly and I feel like they might be more shocked/angry/scared.

Hope this was helpful!

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Hi vampricorne6783, it’s BeingRivy with another review. I apologize for being so upset in some of my previous reviews. It’s only if you have seen them, but I’m gonna try to make real reviews and “review sandwiches” this time.
Here’s my review. I hope you enjoy:
I like the way you started the story without using the words “once upon a time”. I also liked he way that the momentum of the story didn’t dump and add everything to the plot itself. I also enjoyed the part of the story, where Felicity and Ethan were at the date at a restaurant, and met the weird young girl there. I guess the girl must have been a hologram or a ghost (definitely a ghost) because then the clown (Violet) stole her, and killed the so called couple, to get Violet to gain a human rank for society and for Felicity and Ethan to stay as dead clowns forever.
I think there are no wonky parts in the story’s plot so far in my opinion.But I need to add something here. Maybe you can work on the parts you are good at. So that you can be good at them, and then work on the parts you are not good at.
To wrap up, I love your story. But I think you can work on the parts you are good at and bad at, and hone your craft so you can become a better writer.
Thank you and have a nice day.
From, @BeingRivy.




vampricone6783 says...


Oh,okay.I%u2019ll try my best on other stories.

The teen girl was Violet in her human form.



BeingRivy says...


Oh got it. Thank you




For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle