Hello there! I'm here for a quick review.
First of all, the poem is talking about love and broken promises I suppose. Seems you want to stay and leave at the same time.
Well Alice said most of the things I would've said anyway. I didn't quite get it in the beginning.
One more thing I would really love to point out is your title. Next time try to give a title that explains your poem better without being in the poem itself
Over all. You did a good job here. Nice one!
Points: 26
Reviews: 22
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