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Well it's certainly nonsensical. I can say that much, that's for sure. Though I don't really know what it's trying to convey. As in, I don't much understand its meaning. Poetry doesn't have to carry serious topics, of course, but even then, it seems a bit... Odd.

All I can point out is the use of "i," which should be capitalized in English when referring to oneself. That, and sentences should start with capital letters anyway. Other than that, the grammar and syntax seem to be in order.

So that's that, really... I can't judge it properly, it's much too short for any distinct flaws to surface. It didn't really invoke much in the way of emotions in me.

Don't take this as a poor review though. Just my personal feelings on it. Keep at it.

Thanks for sharing this humorous poem. The funny part that I find is the imitation of how reindeer sound. I personally have never heard how a reindeer sounds. But the way you write that it sounds looks very convincing. Does a llama sound that way as well? That I don't know either but its face looks as if it makes that kind of sound. Also comical is that the speaker gives the impression that he can't tell the difference between these two animals.

Reindeer

Kingdom: Animalia Phylum: Chordata Class: Mammalia Order: Artiodactyla Family: Cervidae Subfamily: Capreolinae Tribe: Rangiferini Genus: Rangifer
C.H. Smith, 1827 Species: R. tarandus

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camels

Kingdom: Animalia Phylum: Chordata Class: Mammalia Order: Artiodactyla Family: Camelidae Tribe: Camelini Genus: Camelus
Linnaeus, Species

Camelus bactrianus
Camelus dromedarius
Camelus ferus