quick comment: this first stanza-
i remember the first time
i cried into another person's skin.
it felt a lot like shame, probably.
there's something so embarrassing about vulnerability;
she had left and returned, left and returned, etc.
OH MY GOSH. you are so talented and the first line especially is so raw and beautiful. i am so glad you write poetry because you and your words have the power to change lives. this is so incredible. have a good day <3
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