Hello there,
So, I'm guessing capitalization is a choice, not something forgotten. That style really fits with the broken heart kind idea. It's almost a childlike feeling, which I think describes love and it's turns, being good or bad.
The words give off a development. A change in view happened from the first few lines to the last as, I'm guessing, they learned more and got mature. It's very great in how it's written because it's free and open, yet still contained enough.
It's deep because it is a part of life. You captured that point well. It sounds like one of those romance movies that end badly, but in a poetic way. It's sadly romantic and it is heavy with emotion.
I love how it's put together.
Have a good day,
Haley.
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