This poem paints a very lovely picture, almost like an old film. I can envision it. I love the way you structured this as well. Structured like a natural conversation with breaths and pauses, it feels just as you intended and makes it that much more enjoyable to read. Speaking of natural, this piece just feels genuine. It doesn't seem as if you sat there and wrote it. It's as if you were sitting across the room of this scene recording this dialogue. The symbolism with the dove and twist on the saying, "only fools fall in love", made me crack a smile. Overall, this piece gives me a very warm and comforting feel and was written with overwhelming artistry! It was amazing.
Happy writing!
Points: 267
Reviews: 4
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