Published April 24, 2012
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Howdy!
I'm going to review your work for you!
Best does not need to be capitalised.
A full stop is necessary after to.
Comma needed after joy.
Full stop needed after bored.
Comma after cry.
A comma after adventure
Full stop after that.
I'm not sure these lines make complete sense.
Full stop after forever.
Full stop after where.
This is a very sweet poem; cute!
awe..that's cute,I actually have a friend...that is a lot like your poem.