You're my Bestfriend

by lolacherrycola

Published April 24, 2012

You’re my Best friend
And you know it’s true.
You’re the one I tell everything to
 
You fill my heart with such happiness and joy
When I’m with you I never get bored
 
You make me laugh when I want to cry
I can always tell you what I’m feeling inside.
 
Every moment’s an adventure
A funny one at that
 
Another new memory, every day
Another one that will never fade
 
And it’s these memories
That I’ll cherish forever
 
Even when I’m old and grey
Even when my mind begins to deteriorate
 
I trust you’ll always be there
No matter of when or where
 
So let’s stay friends
All the way, until the end.
Comments & reviews · 2
silentpatronus wrote a review Review · Feb 24, 2013

Howdy!

I'm going to review your work for you!

You’re my Best friend

Best does not need to be capitalised.

You’re the one I tell everything to

A full stop is necessary after to.

You fill my heart with such happiness and joy

Comma needed after joy.

When I’m with you I never get bored

Full stop needed after bored.

You make me laugh when I want to cry

Comma after cry.

Every moment’s an adventure

A comma after adventure

A funny one at that

Full stop after that.

Another new memory, every day
Another one that will never fade

I'm not sure these lines make complete sense.

That I’ll cherish forever

Full stop after forever.


I trust you’ll always be there
No matter of when or where

Full stop after where.

This is a very sweet poem; cute!

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Iamspoken commented Comment · Apr 24, 2012

awe..that's cute,I actually have a friend...that is a lot like your poem.



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