Hi @alliyah! Hey @starlitmind!
This review is meant to be for the prizes that were supposed to be given out after the checklist challenge, and this is late, but I'm super sorry for that. >.<
Anyway, I'll do my best to review this piece!
I really enjoyed the imagery in this poem. The wording flows together really well and the words chosen are lovely. The little doodles give the poem even more meaning, y'know? It suits the theme very well with the black background and all, makes it more "mysterious", because the poem has so many questions for the universe, and it's a mystery, so the black background and simple doodles sort of give off that vibe if that makes sense? xD In short, I like the aesthetic!
I don't need to say anything about the capitalization, because that's always a personal choice, but ngl I like the capitalization this way because it suits the aesthetic, and it doesn't feel too uptight or formal, y'know what I mean?
I don't have much else to say other than this, because I see you guys have already gotten fantastic reviews from previous reviewers. Hope this helped somehow! Let me know if you have any questions~
Wishing you a singing, dancing good time <3
~Lib
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