I think I've heard this one, but I still super like it! Just so you know.
I really like the line:
"A blaze is much too angry to disarm; it's hard to reason why to even try,"
but the ending of it is a bit awkward...which might have been intentional? I don't know, 'reason why to even try," is just weird to me.
Also:
"my heart's a happy fish."
Is the best conclusion to a poem.
That's about it, I think
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