this is such an excellent piece. im not a very experienced writer myself and i know not the first thing about meaningful helpful reviews but i absolutely adored this. mostly because i feel like i relate to the "shattered" sleep cycle youve referred to. the subtle transition you made from talking about planets in outer space to nature right here on earth is nice to read. words like shattering fragments; i believe, really brings out the essence of how devastating it feels to not wake with the sun.
the usage of brackets is also quite interesting. i could almost feel the chill of the winter solstice because of the amazing way in which you have written it. truly a treat for the eyes.
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