Hey there! MapleWay dropping by with that review you requested!
This was a very bittersweet poem. It was very sad but came out with a less sad ending. When the narrator finally feels free from these treacherous thoughts. Speaking of the end you guys did a great job! The way you italicized the word freedom added so much to it!
Otherwise, the poem was very good! Tag me if you guys do another!
- MapleWay
Points: 18
Reviews: 93
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