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hey alliyah from the past, this is alliyah from the future,
I thought I'd leave you a little review today,
this poem is a little bit cryptic don't you think? Thought the subject matter is very touching.
I think this could be improved if you added some more colorful language like W***** or P********
okay, good luck in revisions, (also more punctuations pleez)
over and out,
~ alliyah
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