This poem is very well written, I really like it, good job. The only thing that I saw was that you sometimes forgot punctuation, but that's about it. You did a good job painting a picture in my mind, good job on that, too. I loved the wording, that was great.
Overall, a amazing poem. I look forward to seeing more from you.
As always, keep writing!
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