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First Impression: Umm so this was a nice direction to take the chapter in. I can see some conflict maybe coming our way finally. The plot is continuing to progress pretty well. The one things is that there are so many characters in that last meeting that I don't think I will be able to remember. So far only Grandpa McHale and to a smaller extent Ginger is easy to recognize in this chapter. So think about that a bit.
Anyway let's get right to it,
Grandpa McHale couldn’t stop himself from smiling. “Emma, you mean to tell me that this fella tried to grab you and now he’s got a broken nose?” he laughed.
Well that does sound hilarious.
Serious, Emma nodded. “I warned him, Grandpa, but that Cajun just didn’t understand that I was thirty years younger than him. He’s lucky he wasn’t caned like that other guy.”
Yes I approve of this system.
“Forgive me sweetheart,” he said, still smiling. “It’s not funny, but it is. You were only in Beaumont for a day, and not only did you convince Texas to join us, but you broke the nose of their Secretary of Defense.”
Wow that does sound like she made Grandpa proud.
Grandpa poured himself and Ginger some whiskey, handing his colleague a rather full glass. “Kentucky’s joinin’ up with us, too, and the Rednecks are talkin’ about it. Because of the work you three did, we’re assemblin’ a proper Congress, and one old man is about to be named President pro tempore.”
Hmm...suspiciously easy all that happens. The plan is coming to fruition almost too smoothly. I suspect future foul play.
Grandpa McHale shook his head. “We’re gonna try for the Coastal States first, and then we’re gonna see what Canada knows. According to the Floridan governor-- she leads the Coastal States-- Michigan and Winsconsin created a new government run by their governors. If we can get those two to join us, then we can push the fascists out of Illinois.”
“When did they push into Illinois?” Ginger asked.
Okay that seems like it was intended for us. I mean wouldn't she have been informed of such things immediately upon arrival or at least that's the understanding I have.
“That’s because it’s been split between Memphis, Martin, and the rest of the state,” Ginger said before returning to Grandpa McHale. “How old is he?”
But shouldn't you still be able to see it? Just saying.
There was a long pause, and then Emma asked, “Since when are we able to print money?”
“We don’t,” her grandfather answered. “We’ll pay him roughly that much in food, clothing, and ammunition. Consider it a late birthday and Christmas present.”
Well that explains 'cause I was about to fire off a "HOW DID MONEY APPEAR?"
In addition to Senator Schwartz, Grandpa McHale, and Austin, Senator McCloy, Edwin Hayes of Kentucky, and Juanita Flores and Isaiah Hurt of Texas also joined them. There were a few other interns, but no one else brought any members of their family.
Kind of a large namelist. I'm going to need a notebook to keep track of all of these now.
There was an awkward pause. Then, Hayes said, “First and foremost, we are Americans, regardless of our political beliefs. I’ll talk to our two representatives, and we’ll mull it over. But no matter what agreement we come to, Mr. McHale, I think that you need to be our President pro tempore and our leader in the Senate.”
Well that I can agree with.
“I want Mrs. McCloy to do it,” Hurt said. “She supports the president. I don’t mean you any disrespect, Mr. McHale, but I don’t think you do.”
The group of Senators and interns looked at McCloy and Flores.
Finally something throws a wrench into the plans.
Once the others were reseated, Grandpa McHale looked at the two Kentucky Senators. “Thank you both for your support. Esa-- may I call you Esa?”
“If I can call you William,” she replied.
“Well, then, Esa, Ed, thank you both for your support. I hope that you're ready for two things to happen.”
Well he at least was going to open with that which is nice.
"Yes, Mr. Senator. We are.”
Isn't everyone always living history....sorry nitpick mode was activated.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall this was pretty nicely done as always. I do think the setting for that last bit is a bit under-described. It could use a couple more things to help us see where each person is in relation to the other especially when there are so many characters in here. Anyway that's just a little thing to keep in mind. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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