I'M SAD THAT THIS IS OVER
STRINGBEAN immediately sits up, flabberghasted. Ignoring the cold, she races to her desk downstairs, closes all of the WFPs and Docs, and checks her college work. Within three hours, her work is completed, and she goes to sleep. VILNIUS and SHADOW gently try to wake her
Oh my gosh, Stringbean, I am so proud of you. I need some of that motivation, please give it to me xD
VILNIUS: (loudly) GRAMMY BEAN BEAN, YOU DIDN'T TAKE OUT YOUR DENTURES!
DENTURES???
STRINGBEAN: (snorts) Huh? Whazzat? Dentures? Sinestra? Gramma? Huh?
VILNIUS: (smirks) See? Very effective.
I mean, that's one way to wake someone up I guess xDSHADOW: (sighs) Go finish making breakfast, or I'll rip up your Lord of the Rings One Volume Edition.
SHADOW: (sighs) Go finish making breakfast, or I'll rip up your Lord of the Rings One Volume Edition.
VILNIUS rushes into the kitchen and moves to the stove
Okay I love how Vil is being threatened xD
STRINGBEAN: (happily, tears in her eyes) God bless the both of you!
I think that's the perfect line to end on since that's similar to what Scrooge says in the end; nice job cx
Okay so I really loved the creative premise behind this script. I never thought I'd be reading about someone getting haunted because she didn't do her homework, but hey, here we are xD I think this would be cool if teachers could read this to their classes, and maybe it'd scare people into doing their homework cx while also making students laugh, because this was ridiculous in the best way c:
But I need to know Strinbean's secrets. How did she complete all of her assignments in three hours?! Please tell me, and thank you ^^
This is just a suggestion, but I honestly think you could flesh this scene out a bit more. Maybe you could include teacher's reactions on her completing her homework, and show Stringbean in a very jolly mood, running around town cx sorta like Scrooge. This is just a suggestion, though!

I LOVE THIS SCRIPT A LOT. NICE JOB!!!
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