Hello MJTucker! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
My interpretation:
**looks** I don't really need to, don't you think? It's clearly said in the poem
Overall:
I loved this! Why doesn't it have more likes?! I have three reasons:
1. Pretty much every single girl in my school either a) wears a crap-ton of makeup on their skin so they look like a baked cake, b) has disgusting perfume on, c) has slutty clothes, or, most of the time, d) all of the above. I hate that they do that and you can just tell who the ones are who are growing up way too fast.
2. I have always been a huge fan of personal beauty. If you're not pretty, who cares? You're awesome inside
3. I only have one word: Drama.
Keep up the great work!!
Why haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
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