by SpunkyKitty, Stellarjay, TheBlueCat, lillianna
Featuring: lillianna, Stellarjay, TheBlueCat, and SpunkyKitty.diescriesfliesi was not informed we were writing poetryNeither was I.-a poem by ywsP.S. by TheBlueCat: When someone asks me what poetry is I shall refer them to this.
The pace of this poem reminds us of a limerick, the greatest form of poetry. We also appreciate the honesty of those who wrote the last time. This is a greatly entertaining poem!
Hello @SpunkyKitty! I'll be popping in here for a quick review, hope you're having a lovely afternoon! Okay, let's hop right in.GrowsGlowsIt's beautiful, truly-- a masterpiece! The flow is absolutely seamless in the first stanza!
i was not informed we were writing poetryNeither was I.
I say that writing is what happens when you bleed on paper, and poetry is what happens when the soul finds the perfect musical notes to express it's melody. Both are true, and so is this. although rarely have I seen those sentiments expressed in such an amusing fashion as this. It's a bit hard to review such an obvious joke, but I wish I could get more than a two second laugh out of this? But maybe I'll be able to quote this later. Good job!
This poem was very short so it's hard to write a review but I'll try. I like your usage of rhyme throughout the poem. I wouldn't put a poem by yws since only four authors were involved. I'm not exactly sure what this poem was getting at and I think if you made it longer and added more clarity it would improve the poem. Since yws is a name and an acronym you should use caps (YWS) instead of yws. Overall very interesting read but I feel it would have done justice to make it longer. You all are very talented authors so I know you have the ability to do that!
hehe >:D@TheBlueCat @lillianna @Stellarjay
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