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The definition of a poem

by SpunkyKitty, Stellarjay, TheBlueCat, lillianna


Featuring: lillianna, Stellarjay, TheBlueCat, and SpunkyKitty.

dies
cries
flies
i was not informed we were writing poetry
Neither was I.

-a poem by yws





P.S. by TheBlueCat: When someone asks me what poetry is I shall refer them to this.


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Tue Jan 12, 2021 11:44 pm
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The pace of this poem reminds us of a limerick, the greatest form of poetry. We also appreciate the honesty of those who wrote the last time. This is a greatly entertaining poem!




SpunkyKitty says...


XD Thank you!



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LUNARGIRL says...



Truly amazing!




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LUNARGIRL says...



Truly amazing!




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TheBlueCat says...



Art.




SpunkyKitty says...


Beauty



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lillianna says...



YAY




SpunkyKitty says...


YAY!



Stellarjay says...


YAY!!!!



NastyMajesty says...


*joins in yays*



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Hello @SpunkyKitty! I'll be popping in here for a quick review, hope you're having a lovely afternoon! Okay, let's hop right in.

Grows

Glows

It's beautiful, truly-- a masterpiece! The flow is absolutely seamless in the first stanza!

dies
cries
flies
:') and the last two lines, what a plot twist!
i was not informed we were writing poetry
Neither was I.
*claps* Overall, fantastic poem, you should be proud of this work of art!
Keep it up and keep writing!
(: <#
~Your friendly Neighborhood Majesty of Nastiness~




SpunkyKitty says...


XDDD



lillianna says...


HAHAHA THANKS FOR THE REVIEW



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I say that writing is what happens when you bleed on paper, and poetry is what happens when the soul finds the perfect musical notes to express it's melody. Both are true, and so is this. although rarely have I seen those sentiments expressed in such an amusing fashion as this. It's a bit hard to review such an obvious joke, but I wish I could get more than a two second laugh out of this? But maybe I'll be able to quote this later. Good job!




SpunkyKitty says...


Thank you!



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This poem was very short so it's hard to write a review but I'll try. I like your usage of rhyme throughout the poem. I wouldn't put a poem by yws since only four authors were involved. I'm not exactly sure what this poem was getting at and I think if you made it longer and added more clarity it would improve the poem. Since yws is a name and an acronym you should use caps (YWS) instead of yws. Overall very interesting read but I feel it would have done justice to make it longer. You all are very talented authors so I know you have the ability to do that!




SpunkyKitty says...


So, um, yeah I agree with this. But we weren't actually doing a poem, this was literally taken off @Lilliana's wall. I did it as a joke XD



ChesTacos says...


Ik lol



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NastyMajesty says...


pssst
that's the wrong lilliana
hers has a double n
@lillianna <.<



SpunkyKitty says...


oops




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