Hehehehe...
This is pretty humorous! Your line breaks are a bit off, but that's easily fixed (if you wanted to fix it, that is), and I think that it's just a great twist on the apocryphal story of George Washington and the cherry tree! It made me chuckle and smile, so well done!
I see no grammatical errors, and that makes it all the better. I can't wait to review your every word!
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