Wow, that's a lot to take in in one paragraph... 'Tis I, FantasyWriter76, here with another review on one of your stories. Jumping right on in, we have...
The Positives
I'm not really experienced in the field of spy fiction, and it seems you aren't too strong with it either (No offense!), so take this with a grain of salt. I think this is an interesting start to your series. I get a huge 'Mission: Impossible' vibe to this. But that's probably because it's one of the only spy fiction things I've seen.
The Negatives (Remember: ART IS SUBJECTIVE!)
The first paragraphs are cluttered with so much information to take in without any context. So slow down the pacing, to let the reader breathe for a few moments between info. That's all I have to say besides some nitpicks.
I'm Fantasy76 and my arbitrary rating gives this 4 shocked celebs out of 5 (4/5). This has been Fantasy76 and I hope you have a FANTASTICAL day!
-FantasyWriter76/Fantasy76
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