Hello....*waves with a smile*
"The answer is in the firehorse of our lungs,
the below bellows of something that yells unknown into the empty"
Are you referring to our conscience in these lines? Because, I was really astonished by the description (in a splendid way, off course).
The poem stirs the mind of the reader and compels him to 'question' himself. The metamorphosis a person goes through time has been very nicely portrayed.
"tells us yes, again and again, until the grass has gone gray, until
everything around us has burnt."
Yes... beautiful lines and even in their sentimentality are very practical. I was moved by these lines.
The poem would've been more professional (Grammar Nazi alert!!) if the punctuation was not neglected. And also the capitalization of the words should be considered as significant. (I'm sorry, but, this is a review. Please try to understand, my shackles confine me).
Please write more and write better. It's a very good work.
Points: 466
Reviews: 37
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