Hi, J here for a review.
No critiques needed for this poem, I can't belive only one person reviewed it so far. This poem took my breath away, your perspective totally works for the kind of poem that it is. All the riveting imagery and beautiful word choices. This poem also has what I long for my own to have. Details. The small thins like "dog eared pages" and "worn like sneakers" those comparisions served well in this poem. The way you described the child was just enough, you gave important details yet something was missing and didn't miss it. If that makes any sense at all to you I will give you the biggest internet hug ever.
I give this poem an A+!
Good Job and Keep Writing!!
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