Hello.
I wans't sure what to make of this work at the first, you know, whwther to take it literally or metaphorically. There can be sometimes be a lot of double entendre's in your work. And I feel like this isn't actually one of those occasions because I took it literally.
I'm walking down the flood plains,
and awaiting your arrival.
No one comes here often.
For very good reason.
There is a sense of abandonemnt in this work, and false hope. Like the character is fed up, but is still clinging onto the movement of the river as some sort of allegorical movement for his life or his love.
I remember you well, my love.
A thousand times I've slept.
Keep your lips sealed.
Keep to the fields.
This work is also hopelessly romantic. Well done.

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