Hello.
So this basically looks like a "hate" work in the direction of this character:
Megan. Poor girl. XD
Her name is Megan.
She is so jealous.
For some odd reason.
But she can't tell us.
She will talk to me.
And it will be nice.
But if she leaves me.
Then I will then cry.
So, she's jealous in an incomprehensible way, or at least that's how it feels to the narrator. She is only confiding in one person which is nice, but if the narrator gets left alone by her, then he will feel very upset.
Megan!
Megan!
Megan!
exclamation marks + repetition = AJT's writing.
A bisexual.
Knows sex positions.
She loves your staring.
She asks you questions.
She wants it all now.
Can I give it good?
I know I shouldn't.
But I really should.
So we've established Megan's sexual orientation. I assume this is in some way relevant. She has clearly had sex? Or at least knows a lot about her positions. She likes being admired and talks and is eager. The narrator is then questioning himself about being good in the bedroom? He's also experiencing some sort of moral conflict about "giving it to her."
XD
People call her names.
"Whore", "jizebel", "slut".
Those names don't apply.
She's just curious.
She just wants some love.
She wants connection.
She wants to tell you.
She'd cause friction.
If only you gave.
You gave her a chance.
You can make her smile.
You can make her dance.
You can make her love.
Hmm. So people are really mean to poor Megan, because she is a bisexual? I'm not sure that makes sense.
Again, the stacked way this is written and the repeated language are just how you write. XD Erm, I think in some ways this work could be interpreted as childish. or, very desperate and manic? XD I'm not sure, but Megan seems to be having a tough time of it.
I feel sorry for her and the narrator in this. very sad indeed. :/
~L
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