What a colourful juxtaposition there, friend
And I mean in all ways. This poem is so demanding I had to read it through a good four times before I felt satisfied enough to review it, and not nearly enough to feel satisfied that I've truly read it. So forgive me if this lacks the depth this poem needs.
That being said, wowza.
There is something oddly comforting about the second stanza. Possibly the language, the use of explicit words. I can get behind the second stanza possibly through how humanizing, if not vulgar, the language is. Familiarity can be an odd tool to play with, especially when the familiar hangs on feelings and experiences not usually expanded upon. It's comforting, but not really comfortable, and I really like that about this stanza.
The first is painful. Bold and real. Nothings getting hidden there and the rawness makes it very hard to digest. However, some of the language in its rawness is rather basic. Concepts like the bright and beautiful, etc. I like this and yet there is a part of me that feels I probably shouldn't, so take that with a grain of salt. I'm not sure if I think I shouldn't like it because I don't or because I've been told not to and thats not the kind of advice you nor I would want.
So what I will say is I liked this. I liked the bold and the familiar. It's a beautiful working of the two.
~ Walker
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