It's so painful to witness someone you really love to not be there with you for the rest of your life. Reminds me of the people I have lost. I questioned the the same thing- ''Why does it have to happen?'' One thing that everybody needs to learn is that everything happens for a reason and that its okay to take your time to figure it out.
The question posed are aggressive and full of anguish that helps to maintain a balance in the poem. I actually like the poems that do not rhyme (low-key, lol). A very well written poem. Keep writing!
Best wishes,
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