What a do, What it is. It's your boi here with a review.
You have talent. You wrote things that people actually think of in real life situations.
The theory that I have for your poem(Just a theory) is that the narrator/your situation is going through a lot. Like her boyfriend/best friend left her or passed away, and she is grieving, but she is deeply feeling the pain. They are feeling it to where they can't think straight and they want to die.
You have compared the mind to tangles and kinks. This makes me think that the persons thoughts are so jumbled that it is hard to get through one thing, and that it takes a lot of time to get out of their head.
Anyway, it was really good, you had a lot of imagery, and you also showed emotions that some readers can even relate to.
I really hope to read more of your work in the future. Keep doing a great job!
~Namjoon~
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