Well harrrrryyy andrew's back. Sorry for the drought of reviews, got sick, had thanksgiving, had to work on ghost walk stuff, and fell in love. It's been a month, to say the least, but I'm back up and running again!
These two sections have defiantly been interesting. I'd say the one before this may have spent to much energy building up to the jump... when it was just a guy kicking something, but I didn't mind it too bad, so idk.
Alsoooo, this is definitely an interesting development and hints on how this revolution might function? Maybe the humans have allies throughout the galaxy. And don't mind me, trying to decode that acronym. Milky way space core? Milky way super cats? Milky way star calvary? Hmmm, I'll keep thinking, but into specifics!
Stop pretending this is a sci fi when it's just a cute rom-comDaisy nodded in acknowledgment and gave her best impression of a superior smug look although her inability to stop herself from smiling completely ruined the look.
"I don't think I can argue with [/b]said,[b]" said Harry, turning around," I'm taking the front of the ship. You two take the other sides. I guess we start with whatever loose items are on the floor and then work our way up?"
Is that said a mistake? did you mean that?
"It's written right here, MWSC Rainbow Emergency Escape Pod A49," said Harry pointing out white lettering set next to one of the cracked control panels.
"English?" asked Daisy, "how can it be in English.?"
I must admit this has tickled my brain, a fun little mystery, and harry's explanation makes it even more exquisite. Other aliens? Space traid? Maybe human allies in space?
Also, let me give it one more go, Milky Way Super Cool Rainbow?
Wait I forgot the cruiser bit, Milky Way Service Cruiser? I can't think of a military word that starts with S, but I really hope this is an escape pod from the allied galaxy forces' attempt to liberate these poor humans. Also, if it was an escape pod, wheres the person/thing that was meant to escape in it? Hmmmmm
Anyway, super interesting chapter!
But that's all just my two cents!
Thanks, and keep writing,
Andrew
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