Hey Harry!
RandomTalks here with a short review!
First of all, the title made me smile. Especially the 'so' which was written in uppercase. It feels like something that any teenager stuck in their place would say and the typical exaggeration was quite humorous for me.
So we are in chapter 6 now. To be honest, I though this chapter would follow directly after what Harry had found in the previous one. However, I like the fresh voice of Daisy. She is the only one among them who is probably not as involved or as informed so it is an enjoyable journey to follow her and learn new things as she does. I liked the slow pace of this part and I think this is how you open almost all your chapters. It's a good thing, because almost all your chapters end with a cliffhanger, big or small, and a slow paced chapter beginning gives us time to recover adjust to the new development in the plot.
I really liked the conversation between Harry and Daisy, especially the part where Harry pointed out how ridiculous their situation sounded when said out loud. It made me smile, because with the grumpiness Daisy narrated their life problems at the moment, it did sound a bit ridiculous. I always hang on to these little dialogues because they bring a freshness to the story that no amount of cliffhangers or plot developments could bring.
I am a little curios about Aria in this chapter. I think her staying behind to speak with her mother has some significance to it, but I really cannot be sure about that right now. Then of course, the ending. It was good to not see through Harry's eyes this time, and get the perspective of an observer instead. I wonder what he had discovered that made the spring in his step disappear. Well, I guess I will find out!
Keep writing and have a great day!
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