Hey Harry!
RandomTalks here with a short review!
This was an extremely intense ending to the chapter. I was hooked throughout, and I think you have done a wonderful job of keeping your readers invested in this world and the characters. I liked how action-driven this part. A lot of things happened in a very small span of time, and yet you did not ignore the emotional aspect of this monumental change in their lives. I am also very glad of the fact that you chose Aria's POV for the actual escape. From the beginning of the story, we have seen Aria to be the most pessimistic one. She never really believed that they would be able to escape, and was rather hopeless about the situation. That is why her realization in this part that it was probably the last time they were going to walk through that hallway had such an impact on, well me, at least.
Despite the magnitude of this escape, I like how she did not sway with her emotions in that moment. She was aware of the responsibilities that had been trusted upon her and in the moment of risk, she let her determination and her will to guide the others to safety. She really is a wonderful leader, and I genuinely enjoy seeing her take charge.
The technology for the door seemed extremely impressive. I was a little curios though. It seemed to open suddenly for them. I don't really think that was Mr. Summers, because if her had been able to do that, shouldn't they have made this escape earlier. I am not very sure about that part and what actually happened.
Finally they make their escape. I don't know how free they are right now, considering that they can send guards into the forest as well. But, this was a great feat for them, and I loved how intense the ending to the chapter was. Now, I can actually feel the story heading towards its finale, and I am excited to see what happens next.
That's all!
Keep writing and have a great day!
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