Hi!
First of all, I love the fact that you combined your words with a visual aspect to deliver your message. Just the poem by itself would have been enough, but when it is paired with colors and certain fonts, it just gets 100 times better.
I agree with Vil, with the idea that this poem lacks a proper setting. Although it does not have that proper setting, I do not think it makes this poem harder to imagine. This poem is about emotion, and the reader can apply it to themselves, so perhaps a concrete setting is not altogether necessary.
The vocabulary used in this poem contributes to the emotion, with words such as "raw" and "burned". Those words help to portray the message to the reader, although they are not advanced words (advanced vocabulary isn't necessary for every poem!)
I enjoyed reading this poem and connecting the visuals to the emotions in the poem. Thank you for sharing!
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